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A couple of months back I had a pretty tough feedback session. Almost nothing about my story was working -- the arc didnāt make sense, the pacing was off, the ending was too neat, and worst of all: my main character wasnāt relatable. It was kinda brutal.Ā
But after I picked myself up, I realised how helpful the critique was. I went back to the drawing board and reevaluated the story -- and learned some lessons about nuance and structure that I can use in all my work going forwards.Ā
I also realised how fortunate I was to be in a group of people who were really honest with me. Itās such a gift to have folks who will listen to your work intently and give you thoughtful, actionable notes -- not platitudes you canāt learn from.Ā
Taking part in a residency at UnionDocs with other audio makers and our amazing mentor Neena Pathak wasnāt just a chance to receive feedback. It also allowed me to hear others receiving feedback too, helped me tune my listening ears, and develop the muscle of giving feedback on tape and scripts.Ā
Some of the questions Iām thinking about when Iām listening to othersā work include:Ā
Why do you (the producer) care about this story, and why should I (the listener) care?
Does this episode achieve what it set out to?
What work is this beat / scene doing?
Am I gripped? Whereās the tension?
Which characters do I feel empathy for? Why?
Howās the scene tape? Can I really see the scene in my mindās eye?
What am I feeling while listening? How is my body reacting?Ā
Are there any tropes or over-used devices? Could this character be introduced in a different way, for instance?
Is the sound design effective? Is it emotionally manipulative? Does it make use of space and silence?Ā
So, where do you get feedback? If youāre not in a professional setting where youāre regularly getting notes on your stuff, there are a few options out thereā¦Ā
š Timber - The Edit
Timber is offering professional feedback on your podcast episodes for an introductory price of $20 per month. It works through a subscriber-only area in the Timber Discord called #the-edit. A panel of journalists and producers will ālisten carefully to your audio and give you kind, thoughtful and important adviceā. They cover soundscape, host chemistry, journalistic notes, storytelling and more. Details here.
š Rough Cut CollectiveĀ
This group of audio producers offers editing services including cutting, reordering, refining and deepening a story draft. They listen for pace, clarity and structure. Rough Cut also offers a pro bono service for some projects. Hereās how it works.Ā
š Make a pod-pod!
As I wrote about in an early edition of this newsletter, bringing together your own group of podcasters / producers can have loads of benefits - including getting great feedback. I recommend starting with one of the many radio listservs (eg PublicRadioNYC or UKAN); there are usually plenty of folks interested in collaborating. Learn more.
I would love to hear what youāre listening for when you give feedback -- and whatās the most useful piece of feedback you were given on an audio project? Comment on the post for this email - or let me know on Twitter.
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What Iām listening to
Found this episode of the Audiocraft Podcast really useful ā not only for an insight into interviewing folks about their mental health, but also in how to produce a podcast for a charity.
Enjoyed this Invisibilia exploration of narrative, imagining what a story might look like without the conventions of storytelling. Plus: great train tape š
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